Score: 10

"OMG OMG OMG"

submission: SHIFT 3

date: July 14, 2008

Excellent game. RULES!!! YESH!!!!

I doubt it, but shift 4?

Better graphics or is it just me?

Score: 8

"hmm."

submission: Big Sword

date: July 4, 2008

Not bad at all for a firstie. But I definately think you should take a look at the NG tut page because the animation needs a bit of an update.

Score: 10

"OMG THAT WAS SOO GOOD!!!!!!"

submission: |~Enemy In The Snow~|

date: June 30, 2008

AMAZING!!! VALENTINE DOES IT FUCKING AGAIN!!!

ok, ok. So I'm a fan. Sue me, I love your work. Wow. Simply wow! I am speechless. She's a double agent! DAMN FUCKER! YOU ARE GOOD! The simple heartbreak put in, "do it" in merely a second, and it worked, dammit, it worked, that was sad, but you conjured that feeling in a second, held it, let us feel the pain, and then squashed it. You wonder what her devotion was for, for country, for him? and if for him, why would he crush her life like an ant like that? Utterly fantastic. I, I, -- do you have an official fanclub T__T I feel like such a loser, but dammit.

Well, anywho. Liked the animation! you mixed up the backgrounds, a lot more gradients in the bg. I thought that really worked this time, it went well with the flash, and definately helped to axcentuate (sp?) the foreground (usually the girl). I also thought that it brought a more drab, more bleak bg to the movie and helped it become more warlike. Definately, man, you brought out some serious fucking pain and i should hate you for it, but instead i love you.

Vallentine...

*Shakes Head*

Score: 7

"Well..."

submission: Tank Trailer

date: June 25, 2008

You made a decent movie. You had a good idea, though the lypsyncing was off on some parts... But the one thing that bothered me was the whole words on the screen thing. You'd see a sequence of the live action with the words pasted over it, and then you'd go back to animation. That distracted from the live action, and i didn't like it. It would have been better if you took more scenes from whatever movie you used and put the words on the side with your lyrics of "this summer," and stuff.

's all, though you did a good job.

Score: 10

"Hahaha!"

submission: It's Over Nine-Thousand!

date: June 25, 2008

Great Job!!! >9,000/10!

This flash combines everything that is good about NG. Stupid jokes about animes, References to past works of NG'ers, and a kick'n song and funny video.

Great animation by the way. Splendid job.

Score: 10

"Hahahaha!"

submission: So I Says

date: June 4, 2008

OMFG, I love your style of animation sooo much. Korubinki, and now this??? WHO CAN SPELL FAVORITES???

ok, that aside, i completely agree with mr. way too nerdy mainstream manga/anime kid who's probably 9 under me. (Naruto, Bah!) The idea, blew me away. I was expecting something much more different... You know... Like go to jail for 20 years different... But that's what made it funny. That and the heroic music...

fin.

Score: 8

"OMFG, Lol"

submission: Nami's Super Sexy Quiz

date: May 19, 2008

Decent. You really did have me going, there. And apparently, I'm dense :( I lol'd though after getting pissed off. And half of these reviews are "harmful" so I'ma happy.

I want hentai :'( but I suppose that unintentionally exposed how retarted the questions are for quizzes. They never even pose a challenge >:D and that is pretty retarted.

In conclusion, I want hentai, and i can't get it here. Oh well, frickin big deal. Why don't i whine my *** off like some of these other losers... [Learn to take a joke, guys!]

And you can correct my grammar, spelling, etc, I don't give a shit.

Score: 9

"hum."

submission: Pico's Mansion! (Demo)

date: May 9, 2008

That was a cool, enjoyable game. And it was a lot like pico's school, which in this case was a plus. it was fun to play that little ghost minigame... : D

I didn't necessarily like the coloring after you turned on the lightswitch, and that's why it's a 9 and not a 10.

Score: 10

"hum..."

submission: Rollercoaster Creator

date: May 4, 2008

hum. this game reminded me of the good old days with roller coaster tycoon ^__^

You did an excellent job with this. Really, you did. for a sequel? tie down the track. I didn't like how everything was in freefall, your chars could just fly off and crash into each other... that wasn't exactly a great selling point. The physics engine seemed pretty robust, maybe a tweak here or there?? though i thought the engine was rather advanced... Please, tie down the chars to the track so you don't have them flying off in directions... And make the track clickable. Meaning, make it so the track clicks to itself. If you draw two lines in flash, the lines click to each other and form an angle. Do the same here. not everybody is very precise (me ehem ehem) so a clickiness feature would be much appreciated for those of us who can't draw two lines connected : D

And more more moer tracks!!! WATER SLIDE!!!! ^____^

Score: 5

"Oh god..."

submission: Pico For President

date: May 3, 2008

That preloader was the best... Preloader... I have ever seen.

Simply hilarious and I congradulate you on having teh genious to make it : D

On the other hand, the preloader may be awesome-sauce (hey for my submission, I was too scared to even mess with the preloader at all, not that i ever even submitted my submission lazy, lol) but the video needs a shitload of work. I agree with Archis in everything he said. Every little thing. even the hypocrite part, cause i've never even got a submission in, lol, I've been blammed the one time i had the nerve to put in a submission... I may be glad for that... But nowadays I'm more careful about what i submit.

Enough about me, I don't matter.

The animation needs to be cleaner, I hope your using flash 8 or CS3 at the least (I'm not, I'm still stuck in the dark ages with MX, lol) because otherwise your life mayt be somewhat more complicated in the learning curve. I spent days in the tut section learning everythin i could about everything. There are some really great tutorials out there, and most of the best are under the radar. look up (or just find it in my favs, but you'll have to wade through a lot of submissions, lol) background tutorial, because there is a great one that really taught me a lot about how I draw. also, Ultimate tutorial is godly. That tutorial is absolutely positively amazing, and I recommend reading every last thing in the flash section before you even think about anything, be it game, or movie.

Those are what helped me improve my art.

The sound is also lacking and that is slightly more difficult to fix. I assume you use Audacity or some other, better program... If you don't, audacity is free, just google it. It may be your mic, and the only solution for that is just straight up buying a new one... Lol, sorry, but that's what I had to do...

I hope what I said helped. Good luck, bro. You have some good ideas in your head, and i hope you can expand them.